låtfeedback New track !

[Haxe]

Hello guys, i finished a new track. 😁

Any advice ?

 

Redigerat 20 oktober 2023 av EndeeV

[Fidden]

The sounds are all right, but the structure is a bit weird to me. It's like a 3/4 + 5/4 thing going on. It may just be me failing to find the right rythm. A short section between 0:25 and 0:40 does not follow this structure tho.

There is also a string pad that doesnt quite follow the chords, possibly a sustain-setting that needs to be tweeked a bit.

[Haxe]

2 hours ago, Fidden said:

The sounds are all right, but the structure is a bit weird to me. It's like a 3/4 + 5/4 thing going on. It may just be me failing to find the right rythm. A short section between 0:25 and 0:40 does not follow this structure tho.

There is also a string pad that doesnt quite follow the chords, possibly a sustain-setting that needs to be tweeked a bit.

Thanks, i will try to improve it.

[Flizzaff]

This is nothing without song. Just some sound.